Prayer
Give a moment of grief,
A handful of such moments
closely-knit, no air, no light
Make them stay here,
not a puff of smoke,
A whole pack, packed tight
Don't give an age of joy,
not even an orphan slice,
loose and earthly, very bright
Not the void of lips parting
Or an up-tight bond with destiny
just two closed eyes, no sight
May be it will work
May be it should work
Lethal, but it may be right
Don't lose your divine vision
Never stop this plight
Believe us as we do
We will always be dead quiet
and we are always here to say
Alright Alright !
8 comments:
hmmm. very mysterious :-)
these lines gave me neat thoughts...wish could experience it...
who is the poet?
xyz:),
Please don't ask for the 'poet', I feel embarrassed :)
poet..? hehehe :-)
you do have an intuitive grasp of something, i don't know what though.
btw, shouldn't it be 'lose' rather than 'loose'?
very nice!!!
probably one of the best I've read in recent times..
Keep writin!
Alok, ya, it should be 'lose'. Thanks.
Thanks Chandni.
Very Good Poem.
Thanks
Ram.
Sarcasm is just one more service we offer.
oh so you have got a small fan club going here !
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